Last Year Poem by Valao Kole

Last Year

Rating: 3.5


It is the final step
and we turn off the lights
It is the longest road
Then we`ll begin our fights

Once I did believe
The school`s my second home
And now the aim`s achieved
I`m gonna walk on my own

I guess i need no one
But still i can`t destroy
My memmories, my past
Can`t throw away my toys

And now the curtain`s raising
The final year`s almost gone
Then we`ll go out and do our chasing
And we`ll be chased like everyone.

And everyone thinks he`s something special
Everyone`s believed to be unique
They say that life departs the rubbish from the treasure
And there`s no one to say is it real or is it a trick.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valora Krown 03 February 2009

Thanks, Jon. I like it myself though i don`t think it`s the best i can write. I feel more like writing prose. I`m trying to write a book right now...

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~ Jon London ~ 03 February 2009

I loved the flow of this piece, the step into the unknown....The road can be full of pot-holes..but even if we do keep our eyes open, we'll be sure to stumble and fall along the way..but we dust ourselves down..and continue the walk hopefully we'll find the destination they call happiness in the end. Keep expressing Jon

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