Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Leaving School Comments

Rating: 5.0

Embossed in its very air,
the (now) precious tomfooleries,
the endless repartee on trivialities,
and the freedom
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Neethi (10 Aug 1990)
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~ Jon London ~ 23 July 2008

We're going to be seeing alot more of you, I can tell..........you have an amazing approach to writing....one of outstanding ability Fab work...10 regards Jon

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Lee Crowell 22 July 2008

your ability to write poetry is amazing for an 18 year old don't ever stop i stopped writing poems for 25 years, but now i'm back in action check out some of my work, you might like it perhaps 'give us chinaski' might have meaning for you, it's in honor of my favorite poet, Charles Bukowski careful though, if you check out his work, he is often crude and pulls no punches

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