Thursday, July 10, 2014

Lesson On The Letter S Comments

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S is for sin. I knew what we were in for.
How could we exist without an exit?
He called me his apostrophe, a she, his little rib.
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Jaimee Hills
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Khairul Ahsan 10 July 2014

You have a unique style of writing. Loved it. A story told in a soft, simple tone, but clearly and comprehensively. 'But soon, his low snaked tongue, in speaking, forked our sour sons, our daughter and myself with words' - is a beautiful expression. The title is apt.

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