Saturday, March 31, 2007

Let It All Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't hold it in
Let it all out
Whatever the sin
Just give a shout
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JoAnn McGrath
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Marci Made 31 March 2007

Perfect words you have put here, from your heart......there is no sin in pain, but not to release it like you have here would leave your sould trapped....So just 'Shout, shout, let it all out.' [another great song.] mm.(((())))

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 March 2007

JoJo... I Love this poem its like you looked into my heart with this one... I love people who are honest and speak with their hearts...10

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Just-another- Poet 31 March 2007

cute write... could be a wonderful write with a little tweaking here and there. don't an observation -its fine the way it is.

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