caleb nathanael gonzales

Rookie (5/13/1992 / shafter california)

Let Me Be The 1 - Poem by caleb nathanael gonzales

your beauty overwhelms my hearts desires
consuming my soul with every stare
i wonder why i even try
i just need your attention
i try to fight it
i try to let you go
but your smile brings me back
always thinking of what we could be
your voice like angels praising God
my feelings for you are to much to comprehend
the world exists so you could live
will he care for you like i do
no!
my love could go around the universe infinately
your eyes hypnotize me
making me love you more
make the pieces of my heart complete i`ll welcome you into my spirit
my passion inflicts the everlasting love
uncontrolling feelings tear my heart
wanting, but cant have
break the seal
control the uncontrollable
come into me
be mine
let me be the one! !


Comments about Let Me Be The 1 by caleb nathanael gonzales

  • (2/3/2010 9:26:00 PM)


    it is really good caleb any girl would be lucky to have (Report) Reply

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  • (1/27/2010 9:59:00 PM)


    Wow... You really like this girl. Good Luck Caleb! Love the poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 28, 2010


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