Definitely speaks of the poem we hold subconsciously. Thought provoking, but written in a way that the reader soon forgets the poem. If I may advise, try for a bit more strength of sound, (maybe some meter or rhyme, or a tad harsher language) but be encouraged because you show the strength of idea in this poem.
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Definitely speaks of the poem we hold subconsciously. Thought provoking, but written in a way that the reader soon forgets the poem. If I may advise, try for a bit more strength of sound, (maybe some meter or rhyme, or a tad harsher language) but be encouraged because you show the strength of idea in this poem.