Life is like a balloon
You never know when its going to pop
It could pop any time
You think to yourself
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Your poem rings the truth, but I would suggest you might want to write about something other than death. You are to young to dwell on this subject. Your friend, Lynn.
I like this poem and have given it a rating. I also have a poem titled life. If you would like to look at it please do, maybe it could serve to give you some ideas.God bless Juan.