brennanlee lee

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Life - Poem by brennanlee lee

I feel there`s too much burden for me at the moment,
and this burden keeps me in a cage;
trying desperately to break free;
but no matter how much i try; i know it`ll be useless,
definitely going to take a long time to escape all these,
but when that day comes, i`m not sure whether i`ll be the same person anymore...
whether i still have the ability and motivation to move on,
to achieve the dreams;
swimming in the crystal clear sea of calmness,
flying high in the blue sky where boundaries do not exist,
you feel as though there`s not a single thing that can hold you down,
the superiority of being on the top of the world,
nothing will break you up..nor belittle your strength;
It`s suffocating to be me,
each day passing...feeling smothered,
sometimes i wonder, does this life belong to me or someone else?
Nobody can answer me this.....
Nobody......
Except God himself.....
and He once said to me in a dream long long time ago...
'Son...do not give up in hope...
Do not give up in miracles...
Do not give up in faith...
And most of all...do not give up in life...
Because without life....there is nothing'
And till this day..the dream is still fresh in my mind...
giving light to my plight....
And one thing for sure...I shall never give up....
Never..


Comments about Life by brennanlee lee

  • (4/7/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    Master piece! Thanks for sharing your life with us. May the hand of God continue to guide you. Don't give up, we will be by your side.

    'Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see. This is what the ancients were commended for.' Romans 11: 1-2
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  • (9/24/2007 4:21:00 AM)

    nice poem...,
    good work...
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 11, 2011


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