Life will be the winning horse, if you ride it cautiously
It will be the kicking ass, if you ride it carelessly.
Life will be the pretty doll, if you shape it romantically.
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Love the rhyme scheme. The tone was less motivational and more of a warning. It was like breathing in a breath of fresh air because not a lot of people do this kind of poetry anymore. Great work!
Life is really winning horse, electric power and golden glow of chance. Very nicely presented poem about life that shines with each beautiful word.