Friday, April 17, 2015

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Sinking down in the sand
My feet have been grabbed
Pulling me down down I'm going
I can't see, sand liberating my eyes
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Jo Evans
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Elaine Sept 19 April 2015

Well this was like the coming from a quicksand. Very powerful

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Kelly Kurt 17 April 2015

Good for you. Great poem. thanks for sharing

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Mariem Abdelghani 17 April 2015

Yes you are right, keep on fighting!

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