Tuesday, April 7, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

into the dark cold water
i cant see whats in front of me
i cant hear whats near to come
my fingers are cold
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aeisha romero
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~ Jon London ~ 07 April 2009

I enjoyed this piece alot, your lines filled with depth that drags the reader into this wonderful piece on finely penned expression A joyful 10

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rago rago 07 April 2009

Really beautiful well coined lines....... the potential is more to see u a great poet.......hope I am reading a good poet........please share with me whenever time permits.......

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