Life Poem by kay smith

Life



life is like a ocean
it has its up and downs
some times you find yourself
going round and round
dont know what to do or
where to go, lost
stranded in the middle of no
where, lost forever

(tell me what you think, i am a first time writer)

Friday, March 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a nice start..on a very deep truth...we are left helpless..nothing seems to be working...very true...choose good subjects like this and go ahead...venture into my poems too

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kay smith

kay smith

march 23,1994
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