Saturday, August 1, 2009

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In my life
There was only me..Becuse my strength and saviour you were
men't to be..
You were taken when i was young..And that left me Vunrable and weak
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Leonie Holvey
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Milica Franchi De Luri 01 August 2009

Hi Leonie! As i was reading your poem i felt your pain and i understood that in life you have to be number one on the list in order to survive......... you did good job with this poem.........i like this verse 'to see your self through others eyes- is the best way to be wise', but i fond that extremely difficult to do, as i have tried many times.... Milica

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Leonie Holvey

Leonie Holvey

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