Life Doesn't End Poem by Ravi Panamanna

Life Doesn't End

Rating: 5.0


Returning a glance, shrunken in the womb,
Listening to a deep stir, with emanating sighs,
Towards his home and grounds, winds and dales,
Made a look whimsical and finally descended the steps.

A town he reached, a room he hired,
The plan was plain, ending life, yes - suicide.
Life to him meant thorns, he was profusely bled,
Death he sought, a release, the final gambit.

Night was chosen, the hour was set,
Diary completed, reasons clearly mentioned.
Cyanide he trusted, records he believed,
Freedom in a flash, he could no longer wait!

Twilight was cast, birds returned homeward,
Neon lights opened, The Town Square overflowed.
Pageantry followed, the din continued,
He slowly retreated, solemn moments rolled by.

Across the street, in the thickening mist,
Augmented a scene, tacit and resonant.
Breast feeding a mother was, bare was her breast,
Torn was her cloth, unkempt was her hair.

Two children skeletal, from a pitcher shared a loaf,
A rootless transient life, impelled by a drive.
The suckling baby, mother, the children - a frozen frame.
Spine it chilled, virtual thoughts it removed,
From a swirl, in one stroke he made into striking life.
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Life Doesn't End
Sunday, February 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Between Life and Suicide, what is the compelling force which drives man back to life?Life itself!Life throws limited possibilities before a man about to end his life but certain moments can really give blows of vast possibilities of survival.Heart never dies, this is the salient feature.It happens in lightning speed.Instantly, you are transformed.Life is like that.In this narrative poem, I am trying to draw such a momentous hour.May this poem bring optimism in the hearts of those who plan to commit suicide.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 February 2018

I have read this poem with patience and awe but thankfully it ends in an awesomely happy note. I am inclined to repeat your words 'In this narrative poem, I am trying to draw such a momentous hour.'

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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