Monday, January 2, 2017

Life On Repeat Comments

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Long morning
I should of listened to the warning
Now the day is under way
I'm committed to see it through
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Lee A Howlett
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Gerry Freeman 02 January 2017

Quite a bleak view on life. I can see where you're coming from but I hope you really mean it when you say it isn't you. We can all feel like that sometimes, just don't let it be your over riding view point. Good poem though, uncompromising, a test for the reader. We need to be tested sometimes.

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