Life...Please Come In Poem by Kanwaljit Bhullar

Life...Please Come In

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O Life..Please come in
why you stand still
on the doorsteps
of my breaths
You were not with me at all
I was in hope that me living! ! !
It hurts me a lot
I could not die without you
there must be a life
to rest in peace..! ! !
So don't bother me more
and come in
touch me
wipe out my tears
with your lively presence
I want to feel you..my life
Please come in..! ! !

Thursday, August 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem while creating my blog. Just some thoughts came in mind and I started typing in MS Word totally inspired by my inner voice.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2020

So don't bother me more and come in touch me wipe out my tears.. life, i want to feel you.

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Kanwaljit Bhullar 31 August 2014

Thanks Mr. Mishra

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Gajanan Mishra 28 August 2014

lively presence, good writing.

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