Like A Candlelight Poem by Denny Moonde

Like A Candlelight

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I sit staring at the candle
With pen in my hand I fumble
To myself I grumble
How ever did I find myself in a love tri-angle?
I watch the candle light glow
Id turn it off with a single blow
I see the wax melt away
I realize this candle won't last a day.
I say to me, ``I don't need a candle'
So I blow it off. But oh No!
I was wrong, it gave me some light
Now all around me is rendered dark.
I get the matchbox
And relight the candle
Sadly it slowly fades away
Without light id go astray.
The candlelight makes me see things
The way it glows to me joy it brings
I will sleep with it on my mind
Where else would I find light so kind?
You and I should not stumble
We have problems but that's no trouble
Let's not let what we have fade away
Unlike a candle I want you to forever stay.

Saturday, September 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 09 September 2017

I liked the the metaphor used.. I want you to forever stay..10 You many like my burning candle

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