Saturday, May 26, 2012

Like You And Me Intone Comments

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yet i do acknowledge to accord deep in core
heart knows curve of tipsy shadow intoned
red ramifies in room of intoxication attuned
breeze falters to follow misted labyrinth
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Dr subhendu kar
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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2012

Parallel setting of nature and love is awesome.Usage of simile is also very nice!

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

I enjoyed reading this great descriptive, metaphoric and surrealistic poem, where love facilitates the connection between the nature and the universe.Thank you for sharing.M.

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