Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,539 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Like You And Me Intone - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

yet i do acknowledge to accord deep in core
heart knows curve of tipsy shadow intoned
red ramifies in room of intoxication attuned
breeze falters to follow misted labyrinth
void melds into white breath of heaven afar.

relativity is still relative by quantum of light
colors fill eyes with mystery by varied velocity
vector loses direction yet with magnitude absolved
lattice of green seems to defy precision of laws.
creation longs to belong redemption of soul

night meanders into blue of universe to see path
earth respires by spinning around sun to saunter
as image is true reflection falling from one to another
dew remembers its journey rambling over darkness
joy never flounces to fear by grip of instinctive impulsion

blue blazes glory of universe smearing across sky
spring whispers in vale of tune like you and me
buoyant nature sings song of eternity to flow
love of beauty resolutes to engross upon gloss
by bliss of own god we all rave upon to entwine.


Comments about Like You And Me Intone by Dr subhendu kar

  • Neela Nath Das (6/6/2012 12:46:00 PM)


    Parallel setting of nature and love is awesome.Usage of simile is also very nice! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/1/2012 12:29:00 PM)


    I enjoyed reading this great descriptive, metaphoric and surrealistic poem, where love facilitates the connection between the nature and the universe.Thank you for sharing.M. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 6, 2012


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