Thursday, April 3, 2014

Lines Comments

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The hard line of a razor meets the soft line of skin,
A new line emerges,
This one from within.
A line of ruby red now joins a line of sparkling clear,
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Athena King
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Holly Grace 10 April 2014

Great Job! I like how you made it dramatic and deathly and how you made some of the lines rhyme.

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