Wednesday, January 5, 2011

Lines In The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Laying on my back in a wild wooded area
Late November, amid an early dusk,
A few clouds chase the sun
Into the West.
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 11 June 2011

There is so much great imagery in here. I have had people complain there is no imagery in my poetry, but I think your writing fairly bursts with it.

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