Sunday, October 19, 2008

Little Boys Revenge Comments

Rating: 4.8

The leaves they lie but all around
a silent carpet on the ground
listen carefully if you dare
fix your eyes in a stare
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jack frost
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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

wow that was exhilarating and cute piece indeed..richly entertaining..liked it very much 10+++

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David Threadgold 19 October 2008

Well done Jack a great rhyming poem about a little lads sense of fun. thoroughly enjoyed the read. Regards Dave T 10/10/10

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Tai Chi Italy 19 October 2008

this is lovely work Jack! well done, what a clever son....smiling at your poetic antics, Tai

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