The leaves they lie but all around
a silent carpet on the ground
listen carefully if you dare
fix your eyes in a stare
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Well done Jack a great rhyming poem about a little lads sense of fun. thoroughly enjoyed the read. Regards Dave T 10/10/10
this is lovely work Jack! well done, what a clever son....smiling at your poetic antics, Tai
wow that was exhilarating and cute piece indeed..richly entertaining..liked it very much 10+++