Friday, September 4, 2009

Little Red Comments

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joy must be
sugar on his
lips
pressed against
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lamia harker
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 04 September 2009

I loved your idea and the words you chose, well written. The last stanza is the best, great use of paradox. Well done 'the lie and truth silk and sand desire and distaste'

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