~*~* Little Secrets *~*~ Poem by water lily

~*~* Little Secrets *~*~

Rating: 5.0


And here's my second poem attempt..please let me know what do you think..thanks in advance :)
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I wish you could oneday know
..those little secrets I've been trying to hide

Didnt feel like doing so
.. and wished you weren't that blind.

It's of a great relief although
..would never heal my wounded pride

ever since I saw you
.. haven't slept a night before I cried

yes its three years ago
..and yet my tears haven't dried

true feelings I couldn't show
..have killed me deep inside

best things are better unsaid i know
..is a rule I will put aside

whenever I saw your eyes glow
..like a free bird I felt..I even flied!

remember when I was passing through?
..you heard a slam and saw me stride?

ofcourse you didnt hear the 'Oh'
..I swallowed it, very hard I tried

it was me hitting the wall
..it wasnt my fallen bag..yes I lied

all the blame goes to you
..in your presence all of my senses collide

hmm..what else? is that all? no
...there is an endless list I can provide

but did I say I love you? I dont think so
..I thought you could have already implied!

If you ever believe no one loves you
..pray for me as i must have died!

Ahhh...how I wish you weren't that blind! !
..how I wish you weren't that blind! !

Tayma 12/Feb/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 25 November 2009

Beautiful bickering of love. CP

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