Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Living In Hell Blessed By God Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this place where its cold and hollow
She breaths so silent, all you can do is wallow.
The cries in the night, cuts you like a knife
And all you want is for everyone to be alright.
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Kirsten Leaver
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Kevin Carney 29 September 2010

Truly a great poem, I had to read this three times I didn't want to miss anything you said. Even after I thought about it more. I agree you have talent and please don't stop writing.

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