Lola Won'T You Be Mine? Poem by Venla ...

Lola Won'T You Be Mine?

Rating: 5.0


Sunset on the horizon
I fear what will become
But she’s an insatiable mistress
So I give up to my demons

One look into those eyes
And I know we’ll stay up all night

She will never know
That I understand her lonely soul
She smiles a devil’s smile
But she’s just a broken child

One look into those eyes
And I know we’ll stay up all night

Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?

I know I should go
‘Cause someday they’ll know
I know I really should go
She is just no good

But one look into those eyes
And I know we’ll stay up all night

Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?

Run away my little nymphet
Your beauty makes me sick
It makes me so ill
The kiss of your ruby lips

Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?
Lola won’t you be mine?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 01 July 2010

Run away my little nymphet Your beauty makes me sick It makes me so ill The kiss of your ruby lips beautiful......cdnt be bettered and the quartet coming back in waves like the rising tide creates a strong back ground music....and adds so much feeling and tumult to the experience very well written i so agree with shirley.. ;) cheerts

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Shirley Woods 28 June 2010

Hi Venla, This is great - such a different rhythm - almost a song. My favourite lines are 'Run away my little nymphet Your beauty makes me sick It makes me so ill The kiss of your ruby lips' Cant wait to see more of your writing.

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