Jessica Taylor

Rookie (10/3/94 / New Orleans)

Loneliness - Poem by Jessica Taylor

Loneliness is such an empty feeling,
Its like your life doesnt have a meaning,
It makes you feel like life isnt worth living.

Loneliness it comes and goes
But sometimes its hard to show,
But others its hard for them to know.

Loneliness makes me want to cry
Because it tears me all up inside,
But its hard for me to hide.

Loneliness is all I feel
But I hope its never been revealed,
Because I've put up a guarded sheild.

Loneliness hasn't faded away
I guess its here to stay,
But I hope that it can change.....


Comments about Loneliness by Jessica Taylor

  • (4/14/2008 10:25:00 PM)


    I think poetry is a great way to vent feelings, and you've done just that, Jessica. It takes courage to be vulnerable and you have courage to admit you're lonely, not feeling great. 'Most men (and women) live lives of quiet desperation, ' and most if not all of us have experienced the pits. Some won't admit it, you did.

    Your wording could use just a little work, like the first sentence should read: 'Loneliness is such an empty feeling'

    Keep up the honest writing, and I hope you find a really good friend who you can bare your soul to and enjoy good times with. Thanks for the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 4, 2008


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