Lonely Feelings Poem by Derek Webster

Lonely Feelings



Loneliness comes and goes
how it feels everyone knows
everyone has felt the pain that i say
they have felt it some how some way
It hurts deep inside your heart
it feels like your whole world has fell apart
you feel empty and cold
like it will be this way till your old
You decided to give up all hopes and dreams
like there will be no end or this is how it seems
you scream and ask for help but noones there
you dont even know if anyone cares
One day all these feelings will end
but most likely itll be when your dead
I hope everyone knows what I have said
cause one day at some point the thoughts will be in your head

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 23 May 2008

Certainly not an optimistic poem but one which brings out its emotions starkly and clearly. The pain and anguish are very clearly defined.

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