Monday, February 15, 2016

Long Longed I Comments

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Long longed I to find you,
And jubilant-joyful was I to
At last, and lastingly have I held you
And sadly-happily have held in mind
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Norman Coppola
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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2016

Simple words well twisted in heightened poetic diction to depict the happiness in love found; longing for love sought after; sorrows that come with lost love; and lastly unawareness to the presence of love. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem well crafted. Kudos! Norman. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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