Look Deep Into My Eyes Poem by Bhat Aijaz

Look Deep Into My Eyes

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Look deep into my eyes,
find away my possessed butterflies,
and then tell me,
'you are not missing me'.

Look above in the sky,
you will find a star so high,
close ur ears & say aloud,
'it is not my beloved'..

Look deep in the blue sea,
you vl be shrinking in a wee,
a shark will come to rescue you,
and then write, 'miracles r nothing new'.

Look deep into dark night,
You will see something bright,
close your eyes and say,
'it is the pearl ghosts gay'...

Look, Look & Look deep in me,
find out what ever you can see,
ugly or beauty of chocolate pie,
but in the end, write on ur heart,
heaven lives deep in the sea.....

Composed By
Bhat Aijaz
bhataijaz14@gmail.com
Gulmarg.wapka.me

Look Deep Into My Eyes
Wednesday, July 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaista 18 June 2020

Hi...u owe a nice way to express your thoughts...good poem But don’t use short forms in the poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 August 2017

my possessed butterflies, Look above in the sky, Look deep in the blue sea, Look deep into dark night, Look, Look & Look deep in me, write on ur heart, heaven lives deep in the sea..... Very much poetic are your thoughts. I like your simplicity in using simple words. Very clear are the expressions.. thank you very much dear poet. Tony

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2017

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Thanks for sharing Bhat.

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Bhat Aijaz 05 July 2017

thankuu so much for ur precious comment

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