Wednesday, March 12, 2008

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have you ever felt,
that you can't go on?
that you always end up,
to be in the wrong?
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sarah baron
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Dislocated Heart 20 March 2008

this is the second poem of yours. and... wow................. your talented.. but sometime.. god aint always there.. i can pray with all my might.. but.. sometimes.. it never happens.. and everything is gone.. your poems are beyond.. wonderful.. this one poem of yours... gives me hope. thank you! continue writing. great job. -J.C

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