Saturday, January 28, 2012

Looking Backwards Comments

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Backwards man in a shack
looking over days gone by
chill winds that blew
through the dwellings rotting timber
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jonathan marshall
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Martin O'Neill 29 January 2012

I like your minimalist use of language and words. You often convey more by using less. This poem kind of sneaks up on you. Well written.

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