Losing Control Poem by Victoria Hughes

Losing Control

Rating: 5.0


Careless

losing control

Waning

losing your soul

Drifting

on an unknown breeze

Falling

heavily to your knees

(C) Victoria Elizabeth Hughes 2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 31 October 2005

Oops! Get up girl, where is that stiff upper lip? Nah, just joking. I do that in times of stress. I hope you recover quickly. You express well in poetry. All the best Tai 10 from me.

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