Lost At Sea Poem by T'Asia McCain

Lost At Sea

Rating: 4.3


I walked out to sea
I didn't know he'd follow me
Oh how strong his will
I never knew he heart was still
Amongst this precious time
His soul has turned to grime
Why didn't I do more
I should have caught him at the shore
Erased were all his doubts
I'm letting my regrets out
I wonder what we could have had
The thought of his ashes makes me sad
What was I to do
I wish I would have knew
Now I sit alone and cold
Our memories never grow old
I walked out to sea
I hope no one follows me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T'asia Mccain 23 June 2013

Thank you I try to bring emotion into what I write. Things I know about.I get better results that way :)

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Negar Gorji 23 June 2013

at the beginning it reminds me '' you raise me up '' of secret garden but at the end i felt some thing in my Throat! ! very nice dear.

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T''asia Mccain 21 June 2013

Thank ya! I actually like this one too [3

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