Lost Soul Poem by Kristopher DeLander

Lost Soul



Sometimes i feel like i'm lost
She makes me feel like i'm in a fog
The way her eyes peirce my soul
It makes me feel lost and loved
My feelings will never betray me
So please help this poor lost soul home my beautiful angel
Angel watch over me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Perry 23 May 2010

To be quite honest it has a lot of potential write slow though think about it before you post it. Maybe try writing it out on paper and having someone proofread it before you post it. I expect more of the same sort of things. Lilith

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Angel Magdalene 23 May 2010

Angel? Any reference to me? no just kidding. i love the way it's short and sweet.

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Sara Perry 23 May 2010

very good i think it has a lot of meaning to it

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