Thursday, April 20, 2006

Lost Spring Comments

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I thought to be the springtime's first new groom
and I rose up as early crocus rise.
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Glenn Bagshaw
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Vanessa Brown 20 April 2006

aww what a sad poem! i love the way you parallel springtime with the desire for one girl..and the winter presents her disappearance into the distance. i love hte metaphors and i liked the message of hte poem too, even if it is sad! ! : (well done though!

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