Love Poem by bani kaur

Love

Rating: 4.2


They think it’s easy, but it’s so tough
To get through times - hard and rough.
My heart is sick with evil thoughts,
To go through a life that’s tied in knots
To bear the burden that’s within,
To see the hill slopes down with din
I feel so anxious and depressed
To feel the weight of anger and stress

But there’s a way to easy life
To get through things and hold and tight,
To stand up and against what’s wrong
Its love that is really strong.
It’ll lead you against all odds
So love your friends and love the Lord.
And make it a point to love yourself
Let only love inside you dwell.

To get within a happy you
Its only love that’ll lead you through…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harkrit Nagpal 09 February 2010

Bani, A beautiful, outstanding poem. Is there a hint of sadness in there? What better way to overcome it than Love! ! !

0 0 Reply
Aira Olayvar 24 December 2009

Yeah, that’s true… anyways, we could not really run away from the truth that there are times we seemed not really knowing what to do, what to feel and how to recondition one’s mind to. That’s part of being human… We just have to let love live in our hearts. Bani, just continue writing then… we will be with you, reading you all around.

0 0 Reply
Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

you have meticulously captured both sides of the coin...true that it all lies with in us the hope and the hopelessness, joys and sorrows, willingliness and surrender...with passion and love we surely can get through....good work bani

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success