Friday, January 4, 2013

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I am under a tree
Feeling alone
Whistling a sadistic song
And There is me and no one.
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Bipurna Tara
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 12 January 2013

A good thought. Kindly avoid contradiction in the second stanza.Really you followed the course of falling leaf.No? Sweet write.Edit, please.

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