Love Faded Away Poem by james foulk

Love Faded Away

Rating: 5.0


Our love has faded away
like a ripple in the water
that causes our boat of life to sway.

Once it grew stronger than
we ever thought it would,
like a falling star, it just got smaller.

So now here we stand in a hazy cloud
surrounded by memories of pain
and heatache.

Walking away from what we
once cherished with loving
hearts so tender and mild.

wrote 8-11-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 22 November 2008

Great use of simile and imagery. Sweetly sad and very touching. As always, Sandra

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