This needs a bit of more development to work as poetry. The last line, I think is out of place. It does not belong in the poem. It points to something else which is not the concern of the poem
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This needs a bit of more development to work as poetry. The last line, I think is out of place. It does not belong in the poem. It points to something else which is not the concern of the poem