Thursday, June 7, 2007

Love Is A Funny Thing Comments

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Love is a funny thing
It works out and it doesn't
But just because you're not for him
Doesn't mean you shouldn't
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Davidia Kartina 07 June 2007

'He'll smile, and let you know he's there Even though he isn't' these two lines really pireced my heart..., and that last line FOREVER......amlost made me cry because it made me think that its goodbye Forever for me 2! ! ! ! ! AHHHHHH NOOO DONT SAY GOODBYE FOREVER PLEASE I LOVE YOU but i digress. nice poem. i liked the imagery. Love, DKDAVIDIAKARTINA **********please read and review my poems please ******************

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