Love Is Coming Without Anticipation - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends) Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Love Is Coming Without Anticipation - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends)

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golden reflections wander
in your eyes,
when you are glancing
at deep waters

there are only photographs

a landscape is silence
printed with words
often, increasingly engrossed
in our impetuous thoughts

we feel anxiety in hearts

waiting is worst
when the thought
is so just precipitating breath
this way it here is born a love
and imponderable
which we will get to know

(for CO)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 01 April 2009

It is worthwhile continuing this cycle. For friends you it wrote with 'heart'. By your disciplined poetic workshop., there is no anxiety of neither chatting away through, nor the gushiness. These poems very well are understood. The reader will be not having to wrack his brains what you wrote. Apart from that, their excellent structure and the choice of words (the use of metaphors) is notable and praise. I like it very much :)

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