A Tear Of Happiness Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

A Tear Of Happiness

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happy times flowed down tea
wiped with the touch of loved hands

so a lot our friendship was worth
and now love took the place for it

in the heart it sat down in the first row
as the spectator on the auditorium

close to the stage
and is showing what is happening

at the theatre of the life
it is checking for me

whether it was in a repertoire
space for the art about the truth

of such emotion what most beautiful
it is planning strophes in order

to spice up love
with the poetry of often

repeated words
but each time differently...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 02 June 2009

Poem very good.Written with the great tact and the taste. I like it.

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Afzal Shauq 31 July 2009

to spice up love with the poetry of often tear and happiness...a contrast but but you interrelated very well and with poetic way of expression... the poetry always comes from hearts when there is tears or joys or tear of happiness and extra ordinary pain inside..you seem to me a broken heart but courageous one..well done..enjoying your ric poetry and let me say that you are a poetess of reality to express..best of luck 10/10

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Yelena M. 26 August 2009

A poem of unique flow and strong emotion..I like your poetry style very much, Anna, thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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David Wood 20 December 2020

Well penned emotive love story, a lovely to read.

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

This poetry is magnificent... glory be..peace..

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alan brown 07 April 2018

repeated words as in life repeats itself time after time. enjoyed your poem Alan

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

You are a poetess of real world who can so well corelate tears of joy and of happiness, so beautifully. Nicely written. Thanks for the sharing of this poem.

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Partha Pratim Goswami 10 August 2016

Special moments of love described deliberately- happy times flowed down tea wiped with the touch of loved hands shows the touch of love present in our day to day activities mixed with beloved one's emotion and care.

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