Wednesday, November 9, 2022

Love Is Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even today, I still associate love with pain!
How can one claim to love yet hurts another?
How can one claim to love yet deceives another?
Doesn't love breath?
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Mlungisi Ngomane
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David Wood 09 November 2022

Very emotive poem, and you are right too, particularly first stanza, that touches home, then the killer - rejection. A good 5*

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