Friday, July 1, 2011

Love Is So Crazy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pens bleed on papers, charcoal wears on stones
Hearts bleed in books, I see the truth
Same things written allover, same feelings
Dates don't matter, we the same people
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Meloi Chinsinsi
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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