Monday, September 22, 2008

Love Letter Comments

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Whenever I see you, I can't look away
I can stare at you, the entire day

Your beauty is more magnificent, during the night
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 September 2008

This is another good write, but I see no need to strike a match if she is that hot. You don't know what kind of fuel she's burning. GW62

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Akira Patrick 22 September 2008

OMG! this poem is so me. i like the way u express how much you love him, but you remain garded with your heart. very good..i applaud you! !

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