Love No More Poem by Alfred Ramos

Love No More

Rating: 5.0


Why are we drifting away
Like a dark cloud in the sky
Daydreams slip into the shadows
And no one knows why

Please hear my pleas
Don’t drive me to my knees

I gave you all that you need
So don’t make me bleed

Why is our love like a mirage
That keeps evaporating away
Disappearing into a mist
Slipping from my grasp in decay

Please no more heartaches and tears
No need to tests all my fears

It was not part of the plan
Where I crawled and you ran

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful simile: ''Why is our love like a mirage That keeps evaporating away'' of a well written poem...10++

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Duh Huh 21 May 2009

I love the flow you gave this poem. Sometimes we can be so foolish with our decisions. Sometimes life is worth facing what we need to :)

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