Saturday, December 5, 2009

Love On His Mind Comments

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Oh my darling Lily of the Valley
My dearest Lily of Laguna, I see
Your pure white glow of delight
As across the meadow we wander.
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Joyce Hemsley
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Bethany Williams 05 December 2009

Its a great poem but in America your words are different from our way of English. But like I said it was really great. You should read some of mine

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Danny H 05 December 2009

love expressed very well.

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Joyce Hemsley

Joyce Hemsley

Portsmouth England
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