Thursday, December 13, 2007

Love When Shadowed Comments

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As you depart tear rolls on to the eyes
Like a black clouds blanket the earth
as the storm inflicts the milieu of love
when coursed by the winds of fear as shadowed
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Miriam Maia Padua 14 February 2009

touching write....love when shadowed is at risk.... sad yet sweet words captures heart..... written with love within....that won't vanish by the shadow covering great thoughts.....

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Ewigi Liebe 20 December 2007

While I think on the margin of Contemporary scope The terrain of vision and hope Raised in me a legion of questions. Just as the slow movement of time Into history, what we hoped for Avail its path in the story. Man tried philosophy and it failed Even if the thirst for knowledge Is quenched through a miraculous means The ignorance of what tomorrow Holds brings a desperate hunger. The distinguish beat of life At last man has to face the fact In uncertainty, as we watch he documentation of our existence.The day when rebounds by the warmth of sun Nature yet bedazzled by the mirth of the white dusts The songs of birds resounds the smiles of the day And the rose as redolent by the petals of its love. Love it thou, thanks for sharing.

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