Love wistful as elusive hurtful
Rousing to tears in the eyes
When coalesces into oceanic vast
of sorrow bequeathing love intoned.
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Interesting piece of work....love reading it.. thanks for sharing. Best regards, Mary
Your love of the English language is most apparent in this bitter sweet poem about the highs and lows of love. I enjoy the way you use metaphors of nature in order to express the feelings you share so honestly. A fine poem. love, Allie xxxx